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Robot Comic by Khenmes Robot Comic by Khenmes
Well this is a page done for one of my classes (a final exam actually), basically the assignment was that we could do anything but it had to be the best piece of art we've ever done as a sequential comic........suffice to say this isn't really my best especially when I have six other pages due, so this is something I put together in a few days.

If there are a few things I've learned from this piece it would be to stop doing the same friggen backgrounds and to finialize my pencils better.

Sadly in panel 4 the chin had to be severely cut off due to bad planning which truly tears me up inside because the texture on his face was cool but if I had to accommodate it to help the chin then the final image would suffer (and I couldn't have that since it is the biggest panel thus the most dramatic). Arg, this page has put me through a range of emotions from shame to elated and now to shame again as the execution bothers me. Arg arg arg.

Well also the design for the robots was half baked in that they were hardly designed at all. I just drew them on the page without any preplanning before it and then started inking (deadlines matter a lot). I don't care too much for the design because I based him off of the bionicle Vahki and sadly he does look a lot like a vahki which is very annoying to say the least since I love designing things on my own.

Well hope you enjoy this piece, I worked really hard on inking it and comments of all kinds are welcome!
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RagdollStiches Featured By Owner May 24, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Note to self: don't throw crap at giant robots with large teeth and nasty tempers. It's most likely bad for my health.

I do feel a bit sorry for that guy on the right in the last panel. He's about to get a serious ass-whooping, and although he kinda deserves it, I still hope he doesn't get chewed on too much.

Nicely done! I never got into Bionicle so I actually really like the design you came up with for the main robot.
CitrusFlame Featured By Owner May 7, 2010   General Artist
Its pretty damn good for whipping it up, would love to see it the best of your ability but don't beat yourself up too bad! Just manage your time better next time!
Wacom-Bot Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2010
The inking looks very well done. =D So what's this scene about.
Khenmes Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2010
Thanks dude, I like the inking as well (if only the piece would scan nicely, it looks much better in person).

This scene isn't about anything specific, the assignment was to do a sequential comic of anything and I REALLY wanted to work on some robots (keep a look out for transformers and bionicle pics soon). I suppose the 'story' for this page is that it takes place in some kind of factory where a bunch of smaller bots are going to pick a fight with the larger one for something the big guy did earlier (pretty much a typical bully scene but with robots). And yeah, the 'gang' basically bit off more than they could chew as the vahki wannabe can tear them to shreds (its not quantity it's quality guys). Glad you like it, thanks for the comment!
Wacom-Bot Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2010
No prob.
kirarie Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2010
is the robot going "NOOOOOOOOOOM" ?
Khenmes Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2010
lol that should have been a sound effect XD
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April 24, 2010
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Apr 24, 2010, 3:11:27 PM