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Storytelling page2 by Khenmes Storytelling page2 by Khenmes
Urg! I hate scanners, they can't pick up the white words in the black bubbles! I am so sorry!

I apologize for the crude patchwork.

The lettering for the demon took a long time and there was tremendous debate about his lines. I apologize if it is difficult to read so the script is written out below. My regret for this comic is that the priest gives up far too easily; it would work out better if he was subdued by this force in a far more clear and epic way. The ending was based on reading way too many EC horror comics, either way enjoy and tell me what ya think.

Panel1: demon: Ah! See here are some arches!
priest: Y-you are the demon that possesses this man?

Panel2: priest: If so then-Hey don't walk away from me!

Panel3: demon: If you haven't noticed I just changed the setting. I am in control. That book of yours won't do you any good here, the man you wish to save from me is doomed.

Panel4: priest: Either way, I must save this man.
demon: Well I could cease, provided I would get a soul in exchange...

Panel5: of far greater value.

Panel6: Unless you do not value the fate of this man's soul.

Panel8: man1: Father! He seems to be back to normal, the exorcism was a success!

man2: Of course! Our exorcist is one man who never has to worry about a demons' influence.

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Justin-Tyme Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like your comic works, though I'm sad the scanner does not do it justice.
I bet it looks very nice in person?
Khenmes Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2009
yeah it does look way better in person (for one you can't see the painted marks in the black and the lines are way more clear). but yeah my scanner is seriously cheap so it is annoying to put work up. Thanks a bunch for the fav on my predjedi!
Justin-Tyme Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Totally undesrtand about those scanners! And no problem! :D
Keep up the good work!
machine-sound Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
I love the concept, and how you subtly made the demon poke fun at your mistake to which you fixed well. Good way to save your hide XD

This is definitely a better improvement from your last comic. The panels are much easier to read(not counting the scanner mess up. it happens. blasted scanners!) The angles you drew the panels to show the characters are much better, it makes it easier to understand what's going on. I also love the facial expressions you used on the priest and the possessed man. I liked that panel where the demon was ripping out of him.

Definitely much better than the last comic :D :w00t:
Khenmes Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2009
Thanks dude! It is really hard but I am trying ^_^;; lets hope it goes uphill from here.
CommNagrom Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2009  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
hmmm i like the demon, it looks very Ben 10 alien-esk (which in my eyes is VERY good!) was this for your class?
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November 11, 2009
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